名師解讀 | AEAS作文之范文賞析

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原標題:名師解讀 | AEAS作文之范文賞析

隨著去澳洲留學的學生越來越多并且越來越趨于低齡化,AEAS考試也成為了很多中學生的一門熱門考試。但是市面上對于AEAS的參考資料并不多,尤其是寫作這一塊。并且所給的范文也是很難讓學生去效仿或者比較難于理解。今天Mary老師就帶著大家一起分析一篇AEAS真題寫作,并且附上老師的原創作文供大家學習、參考。

題目如下:

"How to be Happy" is the title of an advice column you have been invited to write for the teenage magazine Freddie and Friends.

Write your column advising teenagers of what they can do to ensure a happy personal life and how this will affect their family and the community.

You should write at least 200 words.

You will be assessed on:

The accuracy of your language

Your use of vocabulary

The content and organization of your text

Time Allowed: 30 minutes

題目要求學生為專欄寫一篇題目為“如何幸福”的文章,要求30分鐘內至少寫200多字。評分方面,會從語言的準確性;詞匯是否準確、合適、廣泛;和內容和結構方面進行評分。

我們寫作的第一步就是要分析題目,然后構思自己的作文結構,確定寫幾段,每一段寫什么。關于幸福,很多中學生都能夠想到的自己容易開心滿足的一些事情,比如多交朋友,多讀書,或者有的同學想到幫助別人,考試考得好等等,大家都可以展開。建議大家展開2-3段就可以,在加上開頭和結尾,就是很完美的一篇作文啦。

How to be happy

Nearly everyone in this world desired for happiness, and early in ancient times, Aristotle, the great philosopher in Greek, had stated that happiness is the final goal of people. However, how to obtain happiness is a controversial issue. As far as I am concerned, to achieve happiness is not a illusory, but something teenagers can achieve easily as long as they keep an optimistic attitude towards life.

Firstly, they can acquire happiness through reading. Reading itself provides people with a precious time to stay alone, conducting contemplation because when they read, they are not interacting with people, but the deep thoughts of the great famous authors, philosophers, sociologists and so forth. The information and knowledge they obtain can not only equip them with the world’s best intelligent essence but also enlighten them when they feel down, exhausted and depressed. What’s more, reading can also assist people in the virtual world to be welcomed, for people always are more willing to talk and make friends with the knowledgeable.

Secondly, exercise is also a effective method to gain happiness. That’s mainly because exercise can bring about plenty of benefits. It keep people vigorous, positive and confident. People exercising regularly can be perfectly shaped and keep in good healthy, which is a luxury for the majority of people in modern society as there are various of chances to be attacked by disease. They can also make friends with common interest through group activities like basketball, football and even activities in gyms like yoga and dancing. And no one would deny the fact that friendship is a infinite source of happiness.

As we all know, laugh can be transmitted easily to others, so can happiness. An intelligent people who reads a lot can be humorous as well,so they can not only easily solve others’ problems easily and wisely, but also give the people around laughter. Even just listening the stories of the books they talk can be enjoying and relaxing. Those who exercises can also set a good model for their family and the whole community. Most people especially the teenagers tend to imitate others, and this healthy lifestyle is really an invaluable gifts for all.

In conclusion, happiness is not a intangible dream but an accessible thing. As long as we maintain a rich mind and keep a healthy life style such as exercise, we can be happy and help those beside us.

結構解析:

開頭提出來,要有積極的生活態度就可以happy。

第二段:讀書可以使人happy.

第三段:exercise 可以使人happy.

第四段:分析這些方面對于他人和社區的影響。

結尾:很多方法都可以happy。

本文作者

Mary

主講科目:托福全科,雅思(寫作 聽力 閱讀),SSAT寫作,AEAS寫作、ACT,TOEFl Junior 聽力 寫作,語法、長難句

學術背景:ETS 官方認證培訓師,西南交通大學英語專業研究生,英語專業八級,雅思8分,6年的出國類考試教學經驗,3年的大學英語教學經驗,對托AEAS、SSAT、福聽說讀寫全科,雅思寫作聽力閱讀的教學都造詣頗深。

教學特色:授課快準狠,能夠迅速精準抓住學生弱點及提分短板,切實有效提升學生分數。其專業的水準,真誠的態度和親和的教學風格備受學生及家長好評,多年來幫助眾多學員跨進理想學府,為其實現出國夢助力添彩。

《津橋國際》專業致力于雅思、托福、SAT、SSAT、GRE、GMAT、ACT、PTE、TOEFL 、Junior等出國語言類考試培訓,迄今為止已成功幫助萬余名學員成功留學海外入讀夢想名校!

2019年6月23日《津橋國際》舉辦的留學/語言/移民/置業/金融/游學夏季出國服務展熱烈來襲,我們不見不散!

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